Difference between revisions of "Talk:Telemetry of Vital Signs"

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==Not encouraging spammers==  
 
==Not encouraging spammers==  
 
Links to the organizations that employ them are what spammers are after.  In the interest of discouraging spam I will remove links to Heart Rate Monitor Zone and find some other reference. - [[User:Farred|Farred]] 14:49, 8 May 2012 (UTC)
 
Links to the organizations that employ them are what spammers are after.  In the interest of discouraging spam I will remove links to Heart Rate Monitor Zone and find some other reference. - [[User:Farred|Farred]] 14:49, 8 May 2012 (UTC)
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==Changes in wording==
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I was unsure what was meant by some of the wording in the article.  Do you think it is satisfactory as I have changed it or should it be improved?  Sometimes I fail to see what is unclear in what I have written because I already know what I mean.  Of course the article is just a stub yet but I would need to do some research to make it substantially more detailed.  - [[User:Farred|Farred]] 16:48, 8 May 2012 (UTC)

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There should be an article called Lunar Medicine and a Category called Medicine or Space Medicine.

Not encouraging spammers

Links to the organizations that employ them are what spammers are after. In the interest of discouraging spam I will remove links to Heart Rate Monitor Zone and find some other reference. - Farred 14:49, 8 May 2012 (UTC)

Changes in wording

I was unsure what was meant by some of the wording in the article. Do you think it is satisfactory as I have changed it or should it be improved? Sometimes I fail to see what is unclear in what I have written because I already know what I mean. Of course the article is just a stub yet but I would need to do some research to make it substantially more detailed. - Farred 16:48, 8 May 2012 (UTC)